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Friday, 26 July 2019

In a dark land, near a lake was a little but bland house, that had no colour but the light that shines all day and there lived a very mysterious person that lived there, no one new about this person they only knew that it was a guy an old miserable guy and no one new why. Every day he would go out and his miniature boat and fish, he would fish all day till this dull plays became black with only a speck of light from the light from inside the house were the old man lived and were he spent his last few days in the dark shady place that he calls home.

1 comment:

  1. sarita it was ok i like the diopcripshon thooe :)

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