I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 24 May 2019
ok
One day in a dark mysterious cave lived a rather happy vampire that should be sound asleep but no this vampire loves to go out in the sun. you may be thinking no that can't be right well it's true he live near a beach and what he does everyday well he goes out with his little pet bat and gets his umbrella and make sure the sun doesn't touch his delicate, fragile pale skin. Then he’s ready to leave to go to one of the most wonderful beaches on this earth. With the see through salty water with one of the tallest palm trees there and the sand nearly as bright as the sun but still beautiful and then it starts to get dark everything turns from colourful and happy to dark and sad so he leaves to go rest in his cave and goes out once again every morning to see the things he sees that makes him most happy and makes him the happiest vampire alive.
Wednesday, 22 May 2019
Today all of a sudden i felt like going for a walk to the park with my dog named Charlie so i went up to dad and asked can i go to the park with charlie, dad looked confused but still said yes. And off we went. When we had got there my friends were also there so i tried Charley up to a pole and went off to talk with with my friends. But by the time it was getting cold i was going to leave so i went to were i had tied charlie up but he was gone the lead was all chewed up. and charlie was no were to be seen.
It was starting to get to get really dark now and if i come home now Dad would want to kill me he really loves Charlie but if i stay out any longer he will get really wired. So i decided to go look for him i looked every were for him around the park and still cant see him eny were by now i started to get really dark and had to go home now or i wont now were to go home. Once i was at the drive way all sorts of things were rushing through my head like how would i say that hes gone as i walked inside i seen charlie running straight towards me i was so confused mum and dad were also confuse how charlie came home along and if i was ok i just said that i was looking for charlie and we had a talk and i never let charlie out of my sight again.🐕
It was starting to get to get really dark now and if i come home now Dad would want to kill me he really loves Charlie but if i stay out any longer he will get really wired. So i decided to go look for him i looked every were for him around the park and still cant see him eny were by now i started to get really dark and had to go home now or i wont now were to go home. Once i was at the drive way all sorts of things were rushing through my head like how would i say that hes gone as i walked inside i seen charlie running straight towards me i was so confused mum and dad were also confuse how charlie came home along and if i was ok i just said that i was looking for charlie and we had a talk and i never let charlie out of my sight again.🐕
Friday, 17 May 2019
moving out.
One day in a village of a hundred people + all lived together in place with a leader called john
then one day a normal guy named bob wanted to challenge him so he could become leader
because he was not happy about how things worked around hear and his wife called marther
agreed and so did bobs brother jim. And the leader of the village jon gave him a chance to go
back to how it was before or challenge him and if bob loses he will have to leave with his family
or be executed and if bob wins he will be rightfully be called leader of the villedge. And if you
guessed that he will challenge him you were correct. So bob and jone both got ready to fight.
Face to face bob and jone were both so ready marther was getting a bit worried but still heard
him on, then they hard 3, 2, 1, fight bob wasn't ready for it and bob got swept off his feet to the
ground, “crack” bob had broken his ankle and could fight no more and he had agreed on the
fight so he could no longer un do it so thay had to move out on the seas were they would mostly
die but a deal is a deal so they were forced to go with some fishing rods worms and luck that
they would survive and when Marther just had a new baby boy it made life harder.
then one day a normal guy named bob wanted to challenge him so he could become leader
because he was not happy about how things worked around hear and his wife called marther
agreed and so did bobs brother jim. And the leader of the village jon gave him a chance to go
back to how it was before or challenge him and if bob loses he will have to leave with his family
or be executed and if bob wins he will be rightfully be called leader of the villedge. And if you
guessed that he will challenge him you were correct. So bob and jone both got ready to fight.
Face to face bob and jone were both so ready marther was getting a bit worried but still heard
him on, then they hard 3, 2, 1, fight bob wasn't ready for it and bob got swept off his feet to the
ground, “crack” bob had broken his ankle and could fight no more and he had agreed on the
fight so he could no longer un do it so thay had to move out on the seas were they would mostly
die but a deal is a deal so they were forced to go with some fishing rods worms and luck that
they would survive and when Marther just had a new baby boy it made life harder.
Later that day they had left and already started fishing because they did not have breakfast
funnily. 30 minutes later they had cough 3 snapper and a couple other types of fish and 1 little
shark that they didn't need after a wiley they could not see land and it was getting dark and the
only food source that had were the raw fish and leftover worms, but they had to eat something
so they ate some of the raw fish. Buy the time it was dark they were all exhausted and the little
boy that they named lil timmy was fast asleep raped in blankets and they started to think that
would not survive the night. In the morning they woke up to a big shock to see another island
they paddled and paddled till they were there as they were getting there they all decided a good
job for each other so Martha would stay near the boat and look after lil tim and get some
metereil for shelter and bob would go find some water and jim would go find food. Buy the
time it was getting dark Marther had made a shelter and bob found a fresh water and jim
found fresh fruit. And were they stayed it got more upgraded and upgraded and they all lived
a good life the end.
funnily. 30 minutes later they had cough 3 snapper and a couple other types of fish and 1 little
shark that they didn't need after a wiley they could not see land and it was getting dark and the
only food source that had were the raw fish and leftover worms, but they had to eat something
so they ate some of the raw fish. Buy the time it was dark they were all exhausted and the little
boy that they named lil timmy was fast asleep raped in blankets and they started to think that
would not survive the night. In the morning they woke up to a big shock to see another island
they paddled and paddled till they were there as they were getting there they all decided a good
job for each other so Martha would stay near the boat and look after lil tim and get some
metereil for shelter and bob would go find some water and jim would go find food. Buy the
time it was getting dark Marther had made a shelter and bob found a fresh water and jim
found fresh fruit. And were they stayed it got more upgraded and upgraded and they all lived
a good life the end.
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