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Friday, 24 May 2019

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One day in a dark mysterious cave lived a rather happy vampire that should be sound asleep but no this vampire loves to go out in the sun. you may be thinking no that can't be right well it's true he live near a beach and what he does everyday well he goes out with his little pet bat and gets his umbrella and make sure the sun doesn't touch his delicate, fragile pale skin. Then he’s ready to leave to go to one of the most wonderful beaches on this earth. With the see through salty water with one of the tallest palm trees there and the sand nearly as bright as the sun but still beautiful and then it starts to get dark everything turns from colourful and happy to dark and sad so he leaves to go rest in his cave and goes out once again every morning to see the things he sees that makes him most happy and makes him the happiest vampire alive.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 09:39

    I like your story and how the vampire lives like a human and i think it could be longer and have punctuation
    Kate

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  2. Anonymous25 July 2019 at 14:00

    Kia ora. I am Rangi i am from gisborne and i go to Gisborne Intermediate School.

    I really liked your story about vampires and the big eal

    I learnt that you can do great animations when you pot your mind to it

    Maybe you could make sure your writing does not go off the screen

    Here you can come see my blog the link is right here
    here

    Mā te wā
    Rangi

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  3. Anonymous25 July 2019 at 14:02

    i really like your animation

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